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Prompting Post V
Please see the most recent MOD NOTE and ADDENDUM
(updated 5 July)
Welcome everybody. How you got here I have no idea but thank you for coming and welcome again, nonetheless . As you may have gathered this is a Fic Prompting Meme dedicated solely to the hilarious and oh-so-addictive BBC Radio 4 sitcom - Cabin Pressure. I'm aiming for this to be pretty anything goes - but in order for everything to run smoothly, there are a few guidelines. Don't worry - they're not too restrictive.
FILLING GUIDELINES
As you probably all know - our meme now has it's very own database created and maintained by the great Enigel. It both catalogues each and every prompt that we post and provides links to fills. You can find it here: Google Spreadsheet
We also have a Pinboard archive which has been put in place by the lovely
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This is a great step forward in making our meme just a little more organised (but not too organised of course. This is Cabin Pressure) which is always a good thing.
So in order to make things easier to archive - Please nest your fills.
This can be done by either posting each part as a reply to that part's immediate predecessor, OR by replying each time to Part I OR - well you get the idea :D
It makes it simpler for Enigel and myself to link fills in a clean and clear manner. Following these guildelines will be very much appreciated guys :D
REPROMPTING
Reprompting is allowed but please include the URL of the original prompt when you do so. It will make it infinitely more easy to Archive which would make both Enigel and I very happy :)
As for everything else
- Be respectful to one another. Disagreements are fine, but not everything disagreeable is trolling. If you suspect someone of trolling, just ignore it. If you cannot respond to a comment without attacking or trolling someone else, keep it to yourself.
- No bashing prompts. It might not be your cup of tea - but obviously someone wants it enough to go to the effort of requesting it. So just scroll past it.
- Prompt away as much as you like guys - seriously, go wild - but please try to fill as well.
- Please no RPF. I'm not trying to oppress you RPF writers and enthusiasts, I would just really like to avoid any legal problems.
- When you post a fill (or post a new part of a WIP) please go over to the Filled Prompts Post (if it is complete) or the WIP Post (if there are still more parts to come) and, following each post's guideline's, post a link to this fill or new part.
NEW - If your fill includes a major element that veers from the original prompt (crossovers, established universes, kinks, et cetera), please take a few moments to check with the OP that such additions are welcome. This has caused problems in the past and it only takes a few moments of your time.
REALLY IMPORTANT ADDENDUM
According to numerous Child Safety laws it is illegal to provide pornographic material to minors. Seeing that the majority of the stuff we have here is rather adult in nature, this Meme is consequently an 18+ zone. Failing to comply to this rule could result in the Meme getting shut down. So if you're here and you're under 18 please back button now.
+ Please do not post anything regarding minors in a sexual situation. It really doesn't matter how tasteful or crass it is, there are laws that classify that sort of thing as child pornography and as such, I'm afraid we're going to have to go with the attitude that safe is better than sorry.
It really is VERY important that these rules are upheld as the consequences are severe.
Other than that - go crazy guys. Any problems please just message me and I'll try my best to work it out.
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Mini Fill: When beggars die, there are no comets seen.
Arthur’s hands flutter uselessly over Martin’s body, over Skip, his Skip. His Skip with scarlet billows blossoming across his chest, with tears in his eyes and his skin paling like he’s fading away- fading to nothing.
“Hey, Skip. Hey, hey, you’re okay, see? I’m here.” Arthur grabs at Martin’s jacket and hauls him into his lap, envelopes him in his body in some fruitless attempt at comfort.
Martin’s lips part and he attempts to speak, choking and spluttering instead and Arthur just doesn’t understand how there could be this much blood. There’s just so much. There’s a little bit on his lips now too, creeping from the corner of his mouth, trying to escape, and Arthur rubs it away on his sleeve.
There now, all better, all fine. he thinks even as he’s covered in Martin’s blood, even as Martin’s hand scramble for something to grasp onto and he’s pressing red fingerprints all over Arthur’s nice white shirt that his mum had just ironed this morning.
Snapping his head up, Arthur looks to Douglas who’s almost as white as the dying Captain, figure trembling, right hand holding his mobile phone in front of him like it might bite and staring down at Martin. Just staring with pupils blown wide and black like they might swallow all the light around them.
Martin’s eyes are just glazed over, just shy of empty.
“Douglas, Douglas you’ve got to do something.” Arthur shouts. He doesn’t beg. He doesn’t need too. This is Douglas Richardson, he’ll fix it. God loves Douglas Richardson, Douglas had said himself.
Martin might be rotten with luck but as long as Douglas was there, earth would bend and the heavens would blaze forth.
“I’ve called an ambulance.” Douglas returns, not in his usual, swaggeringly confident baritone but instead quiet and small and with this awful wobble. But Arthur can forgive him for not sounding like himself because he doesn’t either- he thought he’d go all high and squeaky like when he’s stressed but instead he sounds fractured. Loud and desperate but cracked like glass. And it’s been so long since he’s been anything other than happy that he doesn’t really connect with this panic, this ghastly, nauseating feeling of dread that scratches away at him. It feels like fear.
“No, no. There isn’t enough time. You have to do something. Please.”
Douglas knows there isn’t enough time, Martin’s last light is stuttering- failing. His hands have stopped trying to find purchase on anything, his head is lolling on his neck like his strings have been cut and Arthur keeps on shaking him and shaking him to stop his eyes from shutting.
“Arthur- I don’t- I can’t do anything.”
“Of course you can! You always can.” Arthur is howling at him now, screaming at him now.
“There’s nothing to do- nothing I can do- nothing- God. Oh God.” His voice breaks on a sob and Arthur can’t look at him. That’s not Douglas Richardson. Douglas is the antihero. The arrogant saviour. He’d make sure Martin wouldn’t die and then he’d demand the cheese tray for a month for doing so. He wouldn’t just stand and watch. He wouldn’t cry.
“Douglas, you’ve got to. You can do anything. Douglas, please just do something clever, do something brilliant, please, please-“ Arthur’s roars turn incoherent as he pulls Martin to his chest, holds him tightly as if that might stop his heart from slowing, might cause his breaths to become a little less shallow. But Douglas stays silent.
No, no, no, no, no, no. Arthur thinks and whispers to the air and mutters into Martin’s neck, ignoring the blood- the gallons and gallons of it staining everything. Skip’s going to be so annoyed when he realises what he’s done to his uniform. All that red to wash off his nice epaulets. What’s mum going to say when she sees? Silly Martin.
Then there are hands, Douglas’ hands, prying Arthur away from Martin- who has gone all boneless, whose eyes have shut- and pulling him against his own chest. His lips are moving, Arthur realises, but the worlds on mute.
It takes him a long, breathless moment to realise the scene has been bathed in flashing light, red and blue and red and blue and-
But it’s been far too long and it’s far too late.
Re: Mini Fill: When beggars die, there are no comets seen.
Brokenness aside, it's beautiful, in a "rip your heart out" sort of way T__T
Re: Mini Fill: When beggars die, there are no comets seen.
xD Thank you.
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And I'm fairly new too, so, hi! *waves enthusiastically* :D ❤
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Well written but sad. and not in a 'it's going to get better' kind of way, either. :(