Hello fellow fans!
I don't know if this is the right place to ask, but I've nowhere else to go to...
As a non-native speaker I'm in need of a beta/britpick for the Cabin Pressure ff I am currently working on.

It is not exactly a fill per se, but it fits various prompts... so if anyone was kind enough to help me, I'd be very happy.

And sorry if I am completely wrong here.