I...I don't know what to say and I wish I could just present all the boundless, deep, sweelling and swirling emotions in me after having read this.
The writing is excellent, the plot heart-wrenchingly hurting and yet beautiful, Douglas' reactions are admiring and adoring and Martn....God, Martin. I wanted to eat supper over this but I couldn't go on. This is...creeping into the reader and settling very very deep.
I know you just posted four parts but I can't refrain from saying Please continue. I'm afraid it'll hurt even more - especially when we learn about Martin's ordeal (if we learn about it) but Douglas will be there to help and that is an tremendous comfort.
Re: FILL: If I Believe In Death (4/?)
The writing is excellent, the plot heart-wrenchingly hurting and yet beautiful, Douglas' reactions are admiring and adoring and Martn....God, Martin.
I wanted to eat supper over this but I couldn't go on. This is...creeping into the reader and settling very very deep.
I know you just posted four parts but I can't refrain from saying Please continue. I'm afraid it'll hurt even more - especially when we learn about Martin's ordeal (if we learn about it) but Douglas will be there to help and that is an tremendous comfort.