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Prompting Post V

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Can I have a D/s session with Martin and Douglas? No big humiliation, no big pain, not set in a BDSM AU, just... One of them as a sub and one of them as a dom for a night in their lives together. Author can add whatever kink s/he wants.

I'd always, always second a prompt like that. Love the gentle touch of it!

I will always second this prompt... I might even fill it. Not sure i have the inspiration at the mo - we'll see.

RTYI?

http://mogwai-do.livejournal.com/176081.html#cutid1

http://mogwai-do.dreamwidth.org/176121.html#cutid1

http://mogwai-do.livejournal.com/190031.html#cutid1

Not that there can ever be enough of this kind of prompt, IMO :)

Thank you. While these are very much relevant to my interest I already read those. Some of them more then once. It's just that I'd like something new. But thanks and I hope someone else found a story there they never read before.

I'll try and fill this.
let me have some time to come up with something a little bit original. lol.
Is there anything you'd seriously like to see?

Well... Orgasm denial and Bonding are my biggest kinks but I really wouldn't mind if there wasn't any in it, so... nope! As long as there is no humiliation, I'm good with whatever you want or not want to put in there!
(thank you so much for considering!)

No worries. I dislike humiliation myself. I can read it in a fic, I just ignore it. I know that's unfair to the author but then I can tell them that I liked their story.

I can see if I can do those. What do you mean by bonding? like the scene brings them together like going on a romantic dinner would or something like that?
Sorry for the dumb question, I just want to make sure I understand what you want. :)

(not-OP whispers) I think they meant 'bondage'

*blushes* I really should start to proof read myself... yes, bondage. I meant bondage.

Don't worry about it, my autocorrect is the bane of my life. Lol.
Okay, that's cool. I'll try to get something done for you. :)

How much do I love this prompt for the lack of humiliation and pain alone?

I would definitely love to see this, too. :)

First, i must appologize for how long this took.
And, it's not finished but I don't think it'll be too long. :)

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Douglas was bored. B-O-R-E-D. Bored.

So bored in fact that his thoughts tended to get. a. period. after. each. letter. Which was annoying to say the least. These thoughts circled about in his head like a plane waiting for a spot at a particularly busy airport. And, let's just say that Air Control was not helping. All he could think about was sex. But even just the thought of sex was boring.

And then, it hit him. He and Martin hadn't finished playing the game "Simon Say's".
Which led him to more dense and highly suggestive thoughts of all the stuff he could get Martin to do just for the sake of the game.

And right on queue; Martin stepped out of the bathroom. A blood red towel draped along his hip bones, which jutted out at weird angles because Martin was so goddamned thin; his man-with-a-van job, however, lent muscle to the thinness and it looked slightly more natural than the POW look he'd sported a few months before he got his father's van.

"Simon Say's..." Douglas smirked, not caring at the moment about how pale Martin's skin was, or how thin or muscular the boy is. Martin is naked and wet and Douglas want's sex and he want's it with Martin.

"What, what, what?" Martin stuttered and shook his head. His hair took on a deep red glow thanks to the water.

"Simon say's drop the towel," Douglas finished, because he wanted Martin naked. Coverings of any sort was the first thing to go when two people were about to have sex. Honestly, Martin should be catching on by now.

Martin blinked. Hesitated, but then dropped the towel. It flopped to the floor like a dead fish out of water. Which is the first step to a great fish dinner. A dead fish. Douglas smiled and pushed thoughts of dead fish out the door.

He had Martin standing there, wide eyed, naked! nakednakednakednaked...!

There needed to be more exclamation points for this. Like three hundred thousand. That would look odd on paper though so his inner thoughts had to settle for the one. Still. Martin. And. Naked. And. so not bored.

"Why are you trying to humiliate me?" Martin asked. He'd forgotten his pajama's and was simply going to get them and then return to the bath room to change.

Douglas smiled; "Trust me," he winked. Martin pursed his lips. It was a bad thing when Douglas winked and said those two words because usually it meant Martin was going to be humiliated.

"Simon say's to answer this question seriously and honestly, have you ever had sex with a man before?" and now Martin was obligated to do as Simon said. He huffed air like dragon with a sinus infection.

"Yes,"

Douglas' eyes lit up.

"Simon say's to come and sit on the bed," he waved at his bed and sat up so that he lent against the head bored. Martin muttered curses under his breath as he took a seat on the end of the bed.

"Simon say's indian style," Douglas continued with a smirk. This was awesome. All the control he had over Martin thanks to a simple game. If couples in the BDSM department were looking for a way to spruce up their sex life, this was it!

Damn, that needed like two of those exclamation point things. Douglas sighed to himself. It wouldn't look good on paper, but fuck that shit, this was more exciting than listening in on Carolyn explaining the birds and the bees to Arthur!!!

SCORE! Three of those fuckers!!!!

"Douglas, you seem distracted," Martin snapped his fingers in front of his co-pilot. Douglas came back with a simple blink of his eyes and smiled wider.

"Simon say's to touch yourself on the balls," Douglas continued as if the five second freeze hadn't happened at all.

Martin licked his lips and looked down. Douglas' cock was tenting his pants and Martin was naked - well, okay he knew that all ready but his mind still hadn't gotten over that fact at all - and there was his penis, all ready half hard and begging for more and...well...why not?

Martin started kneading his balls gently. They rolled about in his fingers and his cock slowly grew to its full length. Douglas moaned as he watched Martin fondle those smooth balls.

"Simon say's to grip your cock, and give your self two long slides of the hand," Douglas said, almost a whisper but it seemed to echo in the sudden silence. Martin whimpered and did so. He counted to ten seconds on each of the two passes he was allowed.

"Simon say's stop," Douglas was smirking.

Martin took a deep breath. He wasn't sure what Douglas was up too but he couldn't deny that he wanted to go there with Douglas. He didn't feel humiliated. It was a mutual game. He could pull out whenever he wanted and Douglas might be miffed at him about it, but he wouldn't force the issue.

"Simon say's to undo my trousers," Douglas winked to soften the order.

Martin rolled his eyes but lent forward to do so.

"Simons say's....to take out my cock and kiss the head," Douglas ordered.

"Now you're just using the game," Martin did as he was told. It was odd to lean forward in the position his legs were in, he was so far from Douglas that he had to stretch in order to kiss the top of Douglas' firm, long and thick cock. It was one of those cocks people talked about. The sort that felt good going in just as it did going out. It was one of those cocks that got into the Cock Hall of Fame and was number one Cock in all the Cock Weekly magazines.

Martin snickered at his own thoughts; now, how many more times could he use cock in place of other words? honestly, he was far too horny to play games. But, it was quite exciting to give up control to Douglas.

It's says, not say's.

I may write out the fantasy's Douglas mentions in this part. They sound so hot!
And, this is like finished porn. OMG.

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"Simon say's to lick the head of my cock, Martin," Douglas ordered next.

Martin did so. Douglas moaned as Martin lapped only at the place as he'd been directed. Douglas had the oddest tasting cum Martin had ever had in his life. Coconut and hot pepper. Granted, he'd only been with one guy before tonight, which was technically his first time with Douglas but fuck that virgin shit. He knew that Douglas liked to be in charge and that was why he'd even prefaced this scene with the words "Simon Says'". The old pervert just wanted to take control from the get-go. Not that Martin could fault him for that. It was sexy as hell when Douglas pretended to be the Captain on deck.

"Simon say's to start licking lower, from base to tip," Douglas was almost breathless as Martin bent, stretched more, to be able to reach that spot. The base of Douglas' cock was nestled in a bit of black hair. He smelled musky, Douglas-musky. It didn't have a proper smell so words in English just couldn't describe it as anything other than just Douglas. Martin tentatively licked from root to tip. Over and over and over.

Above him Douglas was moaning. His eyes were shut and he was enjoying the hell out of Martin slowly progressing blow job. What made this even hotted was that he was still clothed while Martin was naked and obeying all of his directions. It was heaven. Douglas kept Martin at this for well over three minutes.

"Simon say's stop," Douglas said. He could cum just by Martin's licking alone. And wasn't that the hottest thing he ever thought in his life? Oh yes, it was.

Martin didn't sit up. He'd only been ordered to stop. His nose was buried in fabric and pubic hair. He had the feeling that Douglas planned that specifically. Douglas squirmed and got off the bed.

"Simon say's hands behind your back," he pulled his belt from his trousers. The trousers flopped to the floor and Douglas stepped out of them. He circled behind Martin and wrapped the belt around thin wrists, effectively trapping Martin's arms.

"Simon say's to relax," Douglas said. He went to the bathroom for the bottle of condition curtesy of the hotel. It was a an original scent and smelt musky but clean. He sniffed it as he padded pack to Martin. He was stretched out on the bed with his legs still cross. His butt was at the perfect level for a nice fucking.

Douglas hummed as her squeezed conditioner onto his fingers. He circled Martin's entrance slowly before pushing in a finger. Martin keened and jerked a bit. Douglas wiggled his finger about until he felt it safe to add another. More conditioner was added as well and soon he heard the sound of it slopping about inside of Martin as his fingers scissored Martin open. Then he pulled them out. All the while listening to Martin's moans and groans as he took the fingers.

Martin was almost sobbing as Douglas pulled them out. He slapped conditioner onto his cock. He rubbed his balls some to bring up the excitement. Then he grabbed Martin's hips. In one fell swoop, he pushed his cock in to the hilt. Martin wiggled and yelled beneath him. Then he stilled. Martin's arse squeezed around the thick girth inside it. Martin buried his face in the blankets.

No one knocked on their door to tell them to shut up. Most people were out to dinner about this time anyway. Douglas did not foresee any future attempts to dissuade their fucking.

"Simon say's to listen to me Martin," Douglas pulled out till only the head of his cock was inside. Martin shivered and gulped air through cotton. Which made him even more breathless. He had to lift his face a bit to get fresh air into his lungs.

"I'm going to fuck you so nice," Douglas continued, "you're going to feel me tomorrow. In fact, I've another surprise for you, that you will like," Douglas chuckled darkly.

"What...what is it?" Martin asked.

Douglas thought about it for a second and then shrugged. He pushed in. Slowly so that Martin could fell every inch of him. Martin gasped and wiggled at the intrusion.

"I've a dildo a bit thicker than me, and it's going inside you and you're going to wear it tomorrow on our return flight home," Douglas teased. "I've a special belt that'll lock it in and a remote so that whenever I want, I can make it shake inside you. You'll never know when I'll do it either," he pulled out, pushed in, pulled out. He was like the fucking energizer bunny, only slowed to five percent speed. Martin tried to grip him so that Douglas' cock stayed in for longer seconds. But Martin was not in a position to demand anything.

"God...Douglas...that's...a horrible way to spend a flight," Martin gasped out as a particular heavy thrust got him on the prostate and he saw stars and rubber duckies.

"And then, when we get home, I'll leave it buzzing inside you through our report with Carolyn. You'll be squirming all about and she'll ask you what's wrong and you'll come up with some inane excuse while I torture you with how fast the buzzing inside you is going. And then when we are free, I'll take you home. Tied you down, and I'll milk you till you're dry. And then I'll fuck you," Douglas continued.

Martin whimpered at the thought. he wanted to do those things so badly, have those things happen so badly. He'd agree to anything right now if Douglas would simply, and properly fuck the living daylights out of him.

"And..then what...?" Martin asked.

"Hmmm..." Douglas thought for a second, "If you're dry you won't be able to cum for a few days. I'll have to make sure to keep milking you so you never cum. I'll fuck you so much that you'll feel me with every movement when we aren't fucking. I'll plug you up and we'll go out to dinner. No one will know but us. It'll be so wonderful..." his paced had picked up.

Martin gasped as his orgasm spewed all over his legs and the bed. He had cum just from Douglas' kinky fantasy's and cock. That was...awesome. Martin would never admit it to Douglas though.

Seconds later, Douglas was cumming inside Martin. Martin groaned as he felt the hot rush of seed inside him. It made him feel slicker inside than the conditioner had made him from before. It felt wonderful.

Douglas pulled out. And then wondered over to his bad.

"Douglas..what?" Martin blinked as Douglas pulled out the afore mentioned vibrating dildo. It was black, and thick and Martin knew it'd be hell to fly tomorrow if he was so distracted.

Douglas smirked; "Simon Say's to wear this Martin," Douglas chuckled. Martin whimpered because then Douglas showed the locking belt and he had been serious about all those things.

The dildo slid in with a little difficulty, but not too much to hurt. Once home. Douglas wrapped the belt around Martin's middle. It locked in the back and the middle strap went down the front where there was a ring for Martin's cock to fit through, and then it came up the back in a facsimile of a ladies thong to be locked into a second buckle. Douglas made sure it was tight and comfortable at the same time.

He smirked and stroked Martin's back; "you are so sexy," he muttered. The dildo wasn't even on and Martin was all sorts of beside himself. His cock had grown too and Martin was trying to hump the bed to get off. That just made the dildo inside him move.

Douglas smiled. This was the best idea he had ever had.

Well.
Your ideas aren't bad - I, and this is just my personal reaction - just miss the emotions and the thing between them.

Also, I'm afraid you lost me again with this or phrases like this:
Damn, that needed like two of those exclamation point things. Douglas sighed to himself. It wouldn't look good on paper, but fuck that shit, this was more exciting than listening in on Carolyn explaining the birds and the bees to Arthur!!!

SCORE! Three of those fuckers!!!!

I feel bad for saying so, but I agree with Anon above.

WHICH: shouldn't put you off writing, Author!Anon. Everyone needs to start somewhere and even though the characters, to be, felt a bit out of character, just the fact that you had this idea and wrote it from beginning to end has its merits!

It's probably not what you want to hear, but try to get cheered up by this.

If you wrote a story with your own original characters, it would probably be great! It's just that you need to work a bit on the voices (or maybe *torture* yourself with re-listening more Cabin Pressure! lol)

Also, yes, while I can't speak for the OP, the prompt sounded to me like he or she wanted to see more of the trust between them? And while it's a good take on a BDSM fic, I didn't feel that connection while reading.

But don't give up!

Thank you for the help. I appreciate it. :)
Thank you very much.

Those were inner thoughts. But I understand. No worried.

Thank you for pointing that out. I'll probably go back a d edit those out when I've time to clean this fic up.

I think I can honestly say you have the first story of a D/s night involving a game of Simon Says. Very original!

If you may permit me a tiny bit of con-crit? (I mean I know I'm the last person who should give grammatical advise; just look at my fill! But this is a rule I actually know!) You seem to have trouble to know when to put the 's or just the plain s at the end of verbs. The apostrophe s means the thing your are talking about belongs to the person (or thing) the apostrophe s is attached to. (Douglas' glass, Martin's van, The car's seats, etc) very rarely (if ever?) put on verbs. I hope this helps you in the future! ^-^

Now, like I said, thumbs up for originality! I feel some of those things should have been talked about first between them (like the dildo on the plane), but Martin seems willing enough, so meh: that's fanfiction for you I guess. :)

And thank you for filling my prompt! Don't worry about the delay.

I always do that. I don't know why those are the one thing I've got a problem with.

I'll clean this up and edit the bit with the dildo. Because you're totally right.

I hope i totally didn't bungle up your prompt

Thank you for reading. :)

You're welcome.

Thanks again. :)

I am sorry it didn't turn out as planned.

I can't help but think that Martin would go flaccid at the mention of his brother's name...
I like your concept though.

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