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cabinpres_fic ([personal profile] cabinpres_fic) wrote2012-05-29 05:28 am

Prompting Post V

Please see the most recent MOD NOTE and ADDENDUM


(updated 5 July)

Welcome everybody. How you got here I have no idea but thank you for coming and welcome again, nonetheless . As you may have gathered this is a Fic Prompting Meme dedicated solely to the hilarious and oh-so-addictive BBC Radio 4 sitcom - Cabin Pressure. I'm aiming for this to be pretty anything goes - but in order for everything to run smoothly, there are a few guidelines. Don't worry - they're not too restrictive.


FILLING GUIDELINES



As you probably all know - our meme now has it's very own database created and maintained by the great Enigel. It both catalogues each and every prompt that we post and provides links to fills. You can find it here: Google Spreadsheet

We also have a Pinboard archive which has been put in place by the lovely [personal profile] oxfordtweed in the place of our late Delicious Archive. This Archive contains a list of all the prompts this meme has to offer - you can find it here: Pinboard Archive

This is a great step forward in making our meme just a little more organised (but not too organised of course. This is Cabin Pressure) which is always a good thing.

So in order to make things easier to archive - Please nest your fills.

This can be done by either posting each part as a reply to that part's immediate predecessor, OR by replying each time to Part I OR - well you get the idea :D

It makes it simpler for Enigel and myself to link fills in a clean and clear manner. Following these guildelines will be very much appreciated guys :D

REPROMPTING



Reprompting is allowed but please include the URL of the original prompt when you do so. It will make it infinitely more easy to Archive which would make both Enigel and I very happy :)

As for everything else



  1. Be respectful to one another. Disagreements are fine, but not everything disagreeable is trolling. If you suspect someone of trolling, just ignore it. If you cannot respond to a comment without attacking or trolling someone else, keep it to yourself.

  2. No bashing prompts. It might not be your cup of tea - but obviously someone wants it enough to go to the effort of requesting it. So just scroll past it.

  3. Prompt away as much as you like guys - seriously, go wild - but please try to fill as well.

  4. NEW - If your fill includes a major element that veers from the original prompt (crossovers, established universes, kinks, et cetera), please take a few moments to check with the OP that such additions are welcome. This has caused problems in the past and it only takes a few moments of your time.
  5. Please no RPF. I'm not trying to oppress you RPF writers and enthusiasts, I would just really like to avoid any legal problems.

  6. When you post a fill (or post a new part of a WIP) please go over to the Filled Prompts Post (if it is complete) or the WIP Post (if there are still more parts to come) and, following each post's guideline's, post a link to this fill or new part.


REALLY IMPORTANT ADDENDUM



According to numerous Child Safety laws it is illegal to provide pornographic material to minors. Seeing that the majority of the stuff we have here is rather adult in nature, this Meme is consequently an 18+ zone. Failing to comply to this rule could result in the Meme getting shut down. So if you're here and you're under 18 please back button now.

+ Please do not post anything regarding minors in a sexual situation. It really doesn't matter how tasteful or crass it is, there are laws that classify that sort of thing as child pornography and as such, I'm afraid we're going to have to go with the attitude that safe is better than sorry.

It really is VERY important that these rules are upheld as the consequences are severe.

Other than that - go crazy guys. Any problems please just message me and I'll try my best to work it out.



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Take Care 5/5 (the end)

(Anonymous) 2012-06-18 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
Arthur decided that if he used Martin's mouth now he'd cum, and so they'd skip that part for now. He wanted in Martin, right the very second.

Arthur shut the dildo off and then slowly withdrew it. Martin gasped. His chest was working over time but he didn't ring the bell three times. It dangled randomly. But Arthur made sure to not go too fast - just in case Martin did ring it the prescribed three times. He didn't want to miss the signal. Just in case Martin got hurt by his actions.

Martin didn't seem to mind as the dildo was pulled out of him and lain to the side only to be replaced by Arthur's cock. He sunk in easily. Martin was wet and open and warm and perfect.

Arthur hissed; "I love you, you're brilliant!"

and then he began to piston in and out at a hard/soft pace. He wanted Martin to feel him. He wanted Martin to wiggle whenever he sat down later. He wanted Martin to think of him and what they'd done. Arthur knew he would. He'd feel especially manly watching Martin wince and wiggle thanks to this nice, slow and yet very thorough fucking.

He stopped as soon as he felt himself at that point. He shivered and waited until cumming wasn't such a big deal, and then he started thrusting in and out of Martin again. He gripped Martin's hips to help adjust his angle. Now he was jabbing at Martin's prostate at each pass in and out. Martin bucked and cried out beneath him. He was crying by now, but he didn't ring the bell.

"Are you all...right?" Arthur asked when he stopped to stave off his orgasm.

Martin rang the bell once...and then twice. He must have had to think about it, but that was okay. Arthur knew Martin would probably have lapses at times like these. Hence why he made sure to watch carefully despite his own needs.

Martin whined loudly and Arthur stretched over Martin's prone body to undo the gag; " are you sure you're all right?"

"Yes, please Arthur!" Martin gasped the words out, "please, please let me cum!"

"Sure Martin, in a few minutes," Arthur promised. He sat back up and gave Martin a particularly rough stab. Martin grunted, groaned and then went boneless on the bed. His hand relaxed and the bell dropped from his grip. Arthur kept the gag off.

He gripped Martin's cock again, pulled and yanked on it gently, just to tease Martin a bit more. And then he undid the clasp on the cock ring and slid it up the hard, leaking rod. The dick was still gooy with lube. And it helped him pump Martin as he began thrusting again. He matched the rhythms.

It took no time at all to have Martin cumming. He spurted so high that Arthur was sure some of the semen had splashed onto the ceiling. He glanced up but was unable to discern if there was any above their heads. Martin's cock slowly deflated in his hand, but Arthur still fucked Martin.

"Ohgod,ohgod,ohgod,ohgod..." Martin muttered over and over again. He felt so over stimulated that it hurt in such a delicious way. Then Arthur was cumming in him. He felt it deep inside and he clenched his buttocks around Arthur's cock.

Arthur yelled out Martin's name and then sagged over the body beneath him. For long moments they just breathed and Arthur cuddled his tied up partner.

"That..." Martin said as soon as he had caught his breathe, "was the best sex I have ever had!"

Arthur smiled, and said; "Brilliant!"

Re: Take Care 5/5 (the end)

(Anonymous) 2012-06-18 10:27 am (UTC)(link)
To be honest, I only read through the second part. I couldn't finish the rest. Arthur's dialogue just seemed very un-Arthurish to me, if that makes sense. It just didn't sound like him at all.

I mean, Arthur is a simple kind of guy, and he speaks quite simply as well. I don't mean that he talks like he's dumb. I just mean that I can't see him speaking the way he does in this fic. Just a bit ooc to me.

I don't mean to be rude or hurtful. It's bad that I have to even write that, but with the wank we've seen the past few weeks, better to be safe.

Keep writing, my dear. I'd just recommend getting a beta.

Re: Take Care 5/5 (the end)

(Anonymous) 2012-06-18 04:28 pm (UTC)(link)
This is what I call a "helpful review" you aren't putting me down or my writing, simply you are telling me what you see is wrong with the fic, and to be honest with you, I totally agree. I knew I had it all wrong, I just don't know how to fix it. And since it's in my head, it's best to get another eye on it.

Now...I just don't know what sort of diologue to do. I know he's a simplistic man, but...I just don't know how to do it.

Anyway, Thank you!
I appreciate the feedback.

Re: Take Care 5/5 (the end)

[personal profile] linguini17 2012-06-18 04:32 pm (UTC)(link)
+27 billion points for being classy, author!anon.

Re: Take Care 5/5 (the end)

(Anonymous) 2012-06-18 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I think, (different anon here) it's not that the dialogue is out of character so much as the fic has set its angle towards a level of technical accuracy (safewords, negotiations, taking it slow, etc) but in the process skipped over the emotional aspect of their dynamic. Which is, in effect, what's knocked your dialogue askew. Because very often that emotional dynamic is the main point of BDSM relationships. While it often informs the nature of any subsequent sex, it isn't automatically the main focus, and that emotional conection was the bit which was kind of skipped over.

Quoting from elsewhere, but it's relevent and written by a real-life sub and I always found it useful:

The phenomenon of submissive headspace (sometimes called "subspace") is impossible to define in any objective, universal sense. It varies from person to person and situation to situation. In a positive subspace, the endorphins released into the bloodstream can even elevate the submissive to such a state of ecstasy that speech and/or movement can become difficult if not impossible. This makes it necessary for the Dominant to pay close attention, as the submissive may not be able to speak their safeword or make any kind of gesture to indicate that the scene has become too much for them. In a negative experience, the same reactions are caused by fear and intimidation.

An important thing to remember about this aspect of Dominant/submissive relationships is that the physical side of it is not the main point. Physical sensations are merely tools used to facilitate this mental state. This headspace is powerful -- a submissive in deep headspace may sometimes lose all ability to think for themselves, even becoming unaware of any world outside their Dominant's will. If given a simple choice between two options, a submissive in this state may find themselves unable to make a decision without direction from their Dominant.

A positive headspace, experienced with a careful and trustworthy Dominant, can be one of the most satisfying experiences a submissive can have. On the other hand, a negative subspace, facilitated by an abusive, irresponsible Dominant, can potentially destroy a submissive's sense of self, creating an extremely negative self-image.

While specific reactions may change according to an infinite number of variables, a few things can be presumed to stay the same: Subspace is a delicate mental state that renders the submissive extremely vulnerable. It is important that a submissive in any level of headspace is protected. If they aren't -- or worse, if they are abused or taken advantage of -- the damage done can be difficult to quantify and repair.

For some the main appeal of it is the utter serenity of subspace. There is literally nothing in mind at that moment except peace, because the sub is not having to think a million miles a second to make decisions or anticipate things or try to figure out how to react to something before it happens. The sub doesn't have to do anything but what they're told. And for someone [[like Martin]] who stresses out over making decisions, that can be very appealing.

Re: Take Care 5/5 (the end)

(Anonymous) 2012-06-19 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
As the original prompter, I just want to say that I am thrilled that you posted and I'm impressed with the way you handled criticism.

I agree that betas are good, but don't be afraid to share. :) There is room for everyone to write.